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  1. Mert Eryurt

    The grand parents are really sweet and my evidence is the part where the grandma says ” …Oh come on honey you are the smartest thing…”.

    • tbui

      Mert, you described the grandparents and provided one piece of evidence. Try giving more than one example to prove your point. This helps your statement become more valid.

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